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Dreams A Dream
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I don't
Can't
Never was
A chicken s***
Wanna be
I am
Now
A cleaner sense
Than in my younger days
I now must dispence
words to understand the fog and haze
I jus' a do
what I need to
I'm still alive
I can still cry
'Bout what I want to
Yes, I do
I was calm
During recess
But that ended years ago
So I progress
Slowly learning things of the ego
As my mind receeds
Closer to the faces of my dreams
I will proceed
And wish to find you on the stream
ALAS!
The dreaming dreamer dreams a dream
I'm ready to proceed
I'm ready to believe
I'm ready to concieve
All the beauty I see
Is found inside of you and me
******************************8000LOVE**
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Re: Dreams A Dream
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:33:13 PM AEST
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Your poem ended on a positive note. Very enjoyable.
Kie |
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Re: Dreams A Dream
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by emystar on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:33:51 PM AEST
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Very creative!
good write.
luv, huggs,
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