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do to me what u will
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:50:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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touch my scars
lick my wounds
feel my pain and
see my rath
sting me with your touch
bite me with
your words
brink from me
brain my blood
and taste my
life
drink of my poison
that is my blood
bath in my tears
and relinquish my love
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2004-04-28 10:50:56]
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Re: do to me what u will
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by EvaRee on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:52:58 AM AEST
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| wow...i am speachless, dont know what to say except very well done |
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Re: do to me what u will
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:21:17 AM AEST
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| there are some words in this that i'm not sure what they mean, but i think i've put this together in my head as its meant to be. from what i think of it, i see this as a good poem. nicely put. |
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