|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A Pirate's Tale
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:37:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
|
____________________
Seduction skimmed its fingers down my spine
Rough bearded pirate, knows the power of his charm
Recalling conversations leading up to this
He would never do me harm
His invitation came as no surprise
We’d make a run for it, against the midnight sky
With sails snapping wildly in the wind we fly
The moon a milky beacon on the sea
Nothing can catch us, no one knows we’re here
Invisible, invincible we sail into the night
Understanding what draws us near
Excitement fills us up like wine, going to our heads
Fog blankets us in secrecy, eases all our fears
A kiss, a taste of heavenly bliss, we linger until dawn
A pirate has no heart they say, but what they say is wrong
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-04-28 10:37:33]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Pirate's Tale
(User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:10:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Many a maiden have skipped town to follow in the footsteps of pirates,, those dashing debonair lads. ha ha ha ha a nice write herein my friend... the tales of a maiden's heart won by the pirate's hand.
If only I who am descended partly from a warrior who was a pirate for awhiles in his younger times could wield such a conquering aura..ha ha ha ha how many maidens would write such as this to my mantra...ha ha ha lol again a good write herein..I enjoyed it... a dream within a dream my friend for I truly do not have a heart. |
|
|
Re: A Pirate's Tale
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:33:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
aye gaille, an enchanting wonderfully woven tale matey, lol, does this pirate of yours have a brother? i want one thats a real man next time! lmao! when does the ship sail? i can smell the sea and feel the spray on my lips with this poem, huggies n' love sis, nessa
p.s. can the dogs come?
@->>->- |
|
|
Re: A Pirate's Tale
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:52:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Yea..very fine description, Pirates are sexy.... |
|
|
Re: A Pirate's Tale
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:55:14 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
just wonderful enjoyable read
Shari |
|
|
Re: A Pirate's Tale
(User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:04:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow! this paints a picture in your head. It's kinda like your ther, when you read this poem. Good Job.
~Brittany~ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
