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Good things do come to an end...!!
Contributed by
The_Poet
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:19:55 AM in AEST
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oops
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It was an ordinary day,
you walked straight right up, without a fray.
Never realised, it would go beyond the smiles
wish it would've lasted longer more than a thousand miles.
From an animal to a human, you brought about the change
all this sure seems so strange.
An angel sent from the heavens
you made my soul smile just with your presence.
I took the liberty to love,
guess I paid the price sent from above.
You were the one I have held in my palm,
but the one I can never hold onto for long
a someone who always made my soul calm
I realize to me you will never belong.
With a heart not willing to forget,
I know that it would always regret.
Consoling myself, I can never convince
that I will have someone better who would come along,
coz baby, you have always been the one ever since,
and to you I will always belong.
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The_Poet
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2004-04-28 10:19:55]
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Re: Good things do come to an end...!!
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:35:01 AM AEST
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Ah yes...to be tortured by what we cannot achieve. I love the way you say goodbye but yet pledge your eternal alliegence. Great write.
Keep it up!
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Re: Good things do come to an end...!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:08:44 AM AEST
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| This is perhaps the most touching and intense farewell you could give to the one you love the most and the best! A very beautiful write |
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