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A Soldier To your Heart
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:36:16 AM in AEST
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I might be just a normal man
but in the matters of the heart
I am a soldier born
a warrior by nature bred
Meek I might be in demeanour
weak in physical stature
but if you ever ever call
I will be a soldier to your heart
I need no drums no trumpets
no flutes nor bagpipes to blare
just a note of your sweer sweet laughter
leads me to arms and into any dare
I might not be a Rambo
but my enemies beware
my hands my mind my countenance
are weapons beyond compare
I might not be in the Marines
but just by your simple "hi"
to the halls of Montezuma
and Tripoli's shores would I swim by
I might not be in the Rangers
but call me if you want
I would race to lead the way
into death if that is your whim
I might not be an Airborne Trooper
but I would drop out of any sky
to whatever place should you choose
under silk parachute would I rendezvous
Upon your word on your every request
give me an order and I will salute "Yes Ma'am"
for you I am ever a soldier
for your heart is my supreme commander.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-04-28 09:36:16]
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Re: A Soldier To your Heart
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:55:02 AM AEST
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I didn't think this was stupid at all.
It was beautiful, romantic, loving and strong.
Very giving as well.
It is one of your best.
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Re: A Soldier To your Heart
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:22:19 AM AEST
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It's not your usual style, but it is sweet and would make any girl worth her salt feel very blessed to have you as her soldier.
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Re: A Soldier To your Heart
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:00:09 PM AEST
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i found this just breathtakingly sweet.
loved how you wrote this.
just amazing poem.
love it.
keep up the awesome work.
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Re: A Soldier To your Heart
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:51:11 AM AEST
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"give me an order and I will salute "Yes Ma'am" for you I am ever a soldier
for your heart is my supreme commander"..
entire poem is well written...here shines sincere love and true romance..welldone.
venkat
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Re: A Soldier To your Heart
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:43:15 PM AEST
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A stupid dream, ha! If that be so, then let stupid dreams be ever with us, I say. Well done. I love the image of the Soldier of the Heart.
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