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Morning Rush
Contributed by
poeticizer
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:51:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Be a part of me today
Go before when
I am weak,
Take me through
to finish everything
I do.
Beat the morning rush
Still the hounds
behind my feet.
Copyright ©
poeticizer
... [
2004-04-28 07:51:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Morning Rush
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:28:31 AM AEST (User
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Hello and a big welcome to YPDC.
I thought your first poem submission was very nice.
You said alot with a few words and I thought the ending was perfect.
Kie |
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Re: Morning Rush
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:00:02 AM AEST (User
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well written, great flow of thoughts, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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