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ALONESS?
Contributed by
emystar
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:11:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Design by: ~Linda's Signatures~
Aloness can be good
or bad, depending
where you're at.
Turn down the tv,
ssshhee, listen.
Could that be
a whipper will singing?
Inside or out
we're never alone.
Not here
at my Country home.
Let the phone ring
Listen to all birds sing.
A walk in the woods can
clear cobwebs
from your brain!
Lay down in clover
Alright ants, move over!
So much beauty
couldn't be
if our eyes
couldn't see.
On a clear starry night
I'm not alone, wow!
by
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2004-04-28 01:11:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ALONESS?
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:46:35 AM AEST (User
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ALONESS GOOD & BAD HOW TRUE THAT IS! ANOTHER NICE WRITE KIE!! KEEP EM' COMING!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: ALONESS?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:53:46 AM AEST (User
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Lonliness makes for great poems. I loved the ending for you realized you aren't alone. It is all in the way you view.
Very well done Emy.
Kie |
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Re: ALONESS?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 11:05:21 PM AEST (User
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Emy, this was a nice write. I love writing about nature, but at times, I have a hard time getting the right words out. Do you know what I mean? *S* Cynthia |
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