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this is how i feel tonight
Contributed by
bigmatt
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:53:33 AM in AEST
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I have no will to be here anymore.
This feeling hit as i watched you walk out the door.
you screamed "we're done" at the top of your lungs.
I went to the bedroom and grabed my gun.
not to use on you, thats something you know i would never do.
realize i'm goin to hell as i get the the dusty box of shells.
i run to the cabnet to get a big chug of wiskey, thats when istart to wonder if she will even miss me.
when i put 1 round in the chamber, i understand that i can't blame her.
she never asked to marry a boozer,
here i sit a lonley drunk loser.
i put the barrel just behind my ear,
i am so releived that the end is near.
when the bullet came out,
i never even heard her shout.
her lips read i love you,
as the back of my head blew...
this is just an attempt to vent. This poem is crap, but i feel better already
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Re: this is how i feel tonight
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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Please take it easy on yourself. this is written well. Very good writing and great venting too.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: this is how i feel tonight
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:29:24 AM AEST
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| good venting... :) |
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Re: this is how i feel tonight
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:02:22 AM AEST
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Truly powerful writing, loaded with emotion, it took great courage to be real in your feelings, sure would not want this to be more than venting.
Blessings
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