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TROUBLED TEENAGER
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:19:12 AM in AEST
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Walking streets day and night
Just trying to find myself.
No one approves of my friends
nor the life they lead.
Caught in this world not even
knowing how to exist.
Mom, Dad doesn't know how
to cope so how can they help?
Confussion, confussion so why try?
How can life come to this?
So could be your thoughts but
someone cares, can see your hurt.
by
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-04-28 00:19:12]
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:37:39 AM AEST
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well... momma... I know such a person or persons... they're troubled by their lives... and what is transpiring in them... it's tuff to be a teenager these days... and I thought I had it tuff in my day...
Thanks for sharing this... good write...
yo daughter...
~Donna~ |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:43:53 AM AEST
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this is beautiful emy, great message, reminds me of my own kidhood... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:38:28 AM AEST
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This is a great write, Emy. Yes, there is tremendous angst in teenagers these days. Life has gotten so turbulent for them. The only thing we can do it love them and do the best we can. Some make it through fine, others just seem to get lost and never recover. My heart goes out to them.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:43:19 AM AEST
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WRITTEN BY FACTS! TEENAGE TIMES IS A TUFF TIME!! NICE ONE EMY!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:55:15 AM AEST
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Very well said. You are wise.
Kie |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:42:46 PM AEST
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| Emy, this is well expressed message. I was like this when I was a teenager. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:30:36 PM AEST
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| its seems this is becoming a more common scenerio nowadays ......... how sad........ :) |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by morelikelyrics on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:01:07 PM AEST
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as always, incredible words from emystar...
like pictures, these writes always paint a picture in my mind, and they stay there for a long time... Just so inspiring!
Never stop...
~Morelikelyrics
If they can land a man on the moon,
Then surely I can land upon your heart. |
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Re: TROUBLED TEENAGER
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by HellsLibrarian on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:54:50 AM AEST
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| that's so true. |
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