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Geometric Love?
Contributed by
morelikelyrics
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:26:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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A fading semi-circle is obsolete, and pleads to feel complete,
While the square does reign, but every side is same.
While the pyramids in the sky fall, crescent to wane,
Right upon the sparkling prisms in your eyes,
Spherical dimensions scatter across a pointless plane,
Insanity on wheels, with speed lines passing by.
Freezing weather crystalizing the ink drawn stains,
It pours to postpone the right angled lives,
But the shapes, they fly, even when it rains...
Post-traumatic angles of depression
All theorized on a straight-edge line,
180 degrees of flat out agression,
But no emotion can a formula define.
A pyramid may have many faces,
All of which, come to one point
An unresonable, pointless vertex.
But the only face that I do seek,
Does not lie upon this polygon,
But you, a beauty so complex.
And tangent love doesn't shade the regions,
Of two congruent hearts,
And forever will they be bisected,
Until united, are the parts.
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Re: Geometric Love?
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:19:23 PM AEST (User
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saturday brunch? or sunday over tea? your choice.
love bella |
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Re: Geometric Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:10:16 PM AEST (User
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don't know much 'bout Geomatry nor history
but this write is really neat.
good work.
luv, huggs,
emy
Thank u so much for yout support in my work. |
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Re: Geometric Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:39:53 PM AEST (User
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*smiles*
Niiiiiiice . . . the bit about
"Post-traumatic angles of depression
All theorized on a straight-edge line,
180 degrees of flat out agression,
But no emotion can a formula define."
was especially appreciated . . . heh. Been yawning --er, uh, listening-- through geometry class (eeevil) all year but never have I been inspired and something of this poetic magnitude makes me want to crumple up and burn my poetry :).
--Nora |
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Re: Geometric Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST (User
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WOW!!!! I love how you did this write. You put the geometric shapes in with it. It's perfect. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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