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Everlasting Tears
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Evil floating in the air
Flowing through her black-eyed stare
Insanity swirling in her eyes
Laughing with glee at their pain-filled cries
Her mind twisted and broken
Joyful at every sobbing plea spoken
Licking blood from her fingers
While the shadow in her mind lingers
Plunging the blade through skin and bone
Watching the crimson river flow down to the stone
The screams slowly fade away
And upon the soft earth they silently lay
Sitting with them tucked in her embrace
She sways to the music, tears running down her face
Bestowing cold kisses upon their heads,
She places them in their eternal beds
Forevermore they shall sleep
And everlasting tears she shall weep
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JadedExistence
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2004-04-27 22:25:50]
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:31:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem, chilling, seriously, the hairs are standing on my arm. All these lines had such an intense effect. Yay for dark poets !! :) |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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whoa, this sounds like somthing i would write.
i loved this.
perfect rhyme.
well done.
welcome to my dark realm my child...
Queen of Darkness.. |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:37:19 PM AEST
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wonderfully dark, welcome to the realm heh, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->-your first black rose |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by devil_child on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:43:57 PM AEST
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| AWSOME POEM! really enjoyed reading it |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:15:40 PM AEST
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Much like the heat of the battle....I like it
thanks |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:38:22 PM AEST
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| This is good, too good for a first timer, you sure you're not into the gothic scene? |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by parkman on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:14:48 AM AEST
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| Excellent and chilling, most enjoyable, welcome to the darkerside of life |
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Re: Everlasting Tears
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:34:47 AM AEST
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Jaded, for a first this is perfection! The rhyming is excellent, the style superb... The darkness so DEEP and DESTROYING. You have definitely left your mark. :)
Lindsey |
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