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The Child Of The Night
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:17:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As you walked that cold, and lonely night
It was I who filled you with fright
All the sounds that you heard,
And all those soft fluttered words
It was all me, as I sat as silent as a bird
I had watched you for hours,
And thought to myself
How easy I could pluck this little flower,
But I let you go instead
And continued to play with your head
I followed you to the beach
And thought about sucking your neck like a leach
But that would have been to easy
For I didn’t want you to see me
Not at this time,
So I tell you something that makes you cry
You begin to look around
Hoping to find someone there, as you’re ripping out your hair
Then you fall to the ground
And continue to look for sounds
Are you going crazy, you start to wonder
Maybe, but not likely
You rest your head upon your knees,
And you hands upon your feet
Then finally I come to you
And face to face we meet
You begin to tell me about the sounds, and the voices you heard
Then I tell you, maybe it was just a bird
You look deep into my eyes, as I read your mind
I hear your heart beat faster,
As you are breathing heavier
I smell your blood as your body becomes hot
Then I sink my teeth into my favorite spot
You begin to moan, and grab hold,
And your soul I now own
And a life of darkness you now live
As the crimson blood from your neck continues to drip
Your eyes become dark, and your heart becomes black
As icy chills no longer fill your back
You are the child of the night,
And soon you too will take a life
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-27 22:17:55]
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:19:55 PM AEST
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| We have one dark family here in YPDC. Great chilling piece of poetry. You described every movement and feeling only too well. |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:26:43 PM AEST
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RON THIS IS KILLER RITA MAY NOT BE ABLE TO SLEEP AFTER THIS DARK WRITE....
LOL LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY GOOD WRITE HUN !!!!!!!!!!!!!
*********LoVe**AnGeL***********
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by reprobate on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST
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Good...Wes Craven is getting ideas from this!
I'll wait with 'baited' breath(pun intended) for the sequel. |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:43:45 PM AEST
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o.k. I see you have succumbed to the Dark Child too!!!!!! LOLOLOL.
Ron, this is fantastic but now I have to call someone to come spend the night (good excuse huh?)
Thank you so much for this. Arden said it was only downhill to hell from here. Guess I am hooked now with one dark poem.
Don't forget, I am the vice-demon of the underworld, muhwaaaaaaaaaa
You drank my blood, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I love this and I love you for doing it, thanks so much.
Rita (Sister Sunshine) |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:44:06 PM AEST
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spooky.
Well done.
luv, huggs, shakes,
emy |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:29:40 PM AEST
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| a bit commical from a goth stand point, but I defenetly like it. |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:42:48 AM AEST
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Thank goodness I take sleeping tablets. I enjoyed every line of this poem. Great write i have given top marks for this excellent poem.
bernard. |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:24:50 AM AEST
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So I guess now Rita joins us in the dark lol great job once again gave me shilling tingles......
Love ya
Michelle |
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Re: The Child Of The Night
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:58:28 AM AEST
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| Muhahhahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was an awesome read Rylo. PSST I wonder if you freaked Rita out. WOW!!!!!!!!!! I loved this. It's excellent. Queen Of The Nymphs AKA *S* Cynthia |
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