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Eternal Life
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:40:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hush now woman, don’t you cry
For I am going to give you an eternal life
In this life you’re going to fly
Higher than the darkest sky
You’re going to drink the blood from many
Then our world would be more pretty
Sinking teeth, and claiming souls
Hush now woman, and do what you’re told
For your life will never grow old
Ripping flesh from the mortals,
And sending them through the darkened portals
Feeling the ecstasy as they bleed
Together we shall share a life in crimson greed
Hush now woman, and show no mercy
For there is none in this life we lead
Hush now woman as I dress you in black
For your life you could never have back
Look in a mirror, and tell me what you see
It certainly is not you, nor me
Your life is over can’t you see
Hush now woman, don’t you cry
For you now live an eternal life
Now you too fly high
Higher than any darkened sky
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-27 21:40:32]
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Re: Eternal Life
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:44:20 PM AEST
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| Iv got shivers this is terrific dark sensual and spooky all mixed into one perfect poetic spot ahhhhhhhhhh a delight |
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Re: Eternal Life
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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Dark poetry is definitely the topic for you.
Great write. |
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Re: Eternal Life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:22:55 PM AEST
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You and Cyndi are just enjoying the dark side way to much here. I can tell now I am going to have to write more to outdo this. Put you people in your perspective places, I am, after all, the vice-demon of the dark, LOLOLOL
Rita |
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Re: Eternal Life
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:27:47 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
~Brittany~ |
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