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My Curse
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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When you look at me
beauty you will see
but look a little farther
then you will really see me.
Many think it's a gift
but it's really a curse
being "ugly" is beautiful
being me is far worse.
You see nothing
but my beautiful face
you see nothing of
all my pain and heart ache.
I know what thoughts
every man has that i see
many go as far
as holding me down to touch me.
You think i'm lucky
because i'm so pretty
but i'd give it all up
so that no one would look at me.
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-04-27 20:50:18]
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Re: My Curse
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by THUGPASSION on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:21:32 AM AEST
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| WOW IM A LOST 4 WORDS............ BUT U SHOULD RELIZE DAT BEING PRETTY IS NOT A CURSE IM SURE UR NOT CONCEDED ITS UR BEAUTY FRM WITHIN DAT MAKES U SO PRETTY ON DA OUTSIDE...-SARAH |
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Re: My Curse
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:30:37 PM AEST
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Wow! You expressed yourself so well. BUt Being pretty in not a curse, you should look at it as being a compliment. Good Write.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: My Curse
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:35:57 PM AEST
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wow this is so good.. your really kind and considerate and you dont take your beauty as a good thing.. thats really good . I loved it a lot:)
Luv ya!
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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