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Boredum In The Razor's Edge
Contributed by
2ndChance
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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A single slice,
and nothing.
Twice this time,
no pain.
Three slashes in my arm,
no feeling.
Mutliple attempts,
but I can't feel the cuts.
Blood rushes to the surface
of my newly shaved skin.
But still no statisfaction
escapes my sorrowed
expression.
Dig a little deeper,
into the veins
that have tortured me for so long.
Open wounds,
produce no happiness.
The old scars
mock
the freshly applied.
There is boredum
in the razor's edge.
Copyright ©
2ndChance
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2004-04-27 20:19:26]
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Re: Boredum In The Razor's Edge
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST
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| hang in there |
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Re: Boredum In The Razor's Edge
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by EvaRee on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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| Always remember that with every bad thing that happens in life, a good thing follows. Keep your head up. Life and death are not supposed to be our decisions, you are here for a reason, i just hope you find that reason so you can be happy. Good luck, and nice work |
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Re: Boredum In The Razor's Edge
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:00:07 AM AEST
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you cannot enjoy the happy without tasting sadness. don't let it end there....
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Boredum In The Razor's Edge
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by Katie2008 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:35:15 PM AEST
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| Bravo, well written. Hang tight and good luck! |
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Re: Boredum In The Razor's Edge
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by Anesthetic on
Monday, 14th April 2008 @ 04:14:45 PM AEST
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describes feelings that i have all to often found myself tangled in. Good write:)
~Charli~ |
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