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Affair With a Knife
Contributed by
crimsondream
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:46:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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something dull
something sharp
cover face
with a tarp
cut along
the dotted line
empty worth
death divine
sing a song
hate, despair
sliced truth
knife affair
paint the floor
dripping blood
falling down
with a thud
sillhouette
always near
ghost of past
haunts my fear
grisly sketch
scarred design
empty worth
death divine
Copyright ©
crimsondream
... [
2004-04-27 19:46:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Affair With a Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:50:56 PM AEST (User
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Wow! such a powerful poem, good poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Affair With a Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:29:28 PM AEST (User
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So simplistic and yet so strong. Awesome.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Affair With a Knife
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:38:35 PM AEST (User
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nice. |
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