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Bursting
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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So much love i have for you,
it overflows my body, mind and soul,
i can not help it leak out,
theres so much it hurts,
bursting out of every fibre in my body.
I just need to know your safe,
to know you have not done wrong,
i just want you in my arms,
to know that im ok.
I feel a deep pain deep inside of me,
its the love, the love i feel for thee.
I can not help it,
i can not stop myself,
i should know better,
i should trust you i know.
Yet when my heart beats that little faster,
my mind becomes mash,
all the things that keep me safe,
are broken into a milion pieces,
and i bungle things out.
I want to trust you,
i really do,
yet sour memories remain,
of a past we wish to forget.
Only thing that keeps me sane,
are the hugs i get from you,
They tell me that im ok,
They tell me no to fret,
and they make me forget.
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2004-04-27 18:50:50]
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Re: Bursting
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by TokenBad on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:53:27 PM AEST
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| Very interesting flow to it. Like when people just let their true emotions flow and are able to post it to words. Great work |
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Re: Bursting
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:21:30 AM AEST
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| i really love the last stanza. its just beautiful. just as you seem to think i am even when im a broken down wreck. |
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Re: Bursting
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by Lost_Shadow on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:31:55 AM AEST
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| wow, I'm impressed this is your best so far now to read the ones after keep up the good work m8 |
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Re: Bursting
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:01:24 PM AEST
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nice.
I want to trust you,
i really do,
yet sour memories remain,
of a past we wish to forget.
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