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++~ My Beloved ~++
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I sit down by your grave
and wish you were here,
you left this world suddenly,
I cry crimson tears.
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I long to be held
in your loving arms once more,
but it's too late to
want you back now.
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I lay down on the wet earth
next to your grave,
I dream of your arms
reaching out to hold me.
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The earth moves beneath me,
a hand reaches up
and grabs my arm.
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I am being dragged into
the cold,wet earth,
my dreams came true.
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I am with you
for all eternity.
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Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.27/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-27 18:34:13]
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:37:02 PM AEST
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| This is extreamly powerful. To say it was well done would be an understatment. |
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:44:07 PM AEST
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awww, this is such a sad poem, but very powerful. This poem almost made me want to cry.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:46:30 PM AEST
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Cyndi, I think you are starting to enjoy this waaaaaay to much! Arden, HELP, I think Cyndi has gone over the dark edge.
Rita |
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:52:13 AM AEST
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| sad..and heart moving.. venkat |
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:57:09 AM AEST
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WOW! PRETTY GOOD POEM YOU WROTE THERE!! FREAKY ONE CYNTHIA!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:23:04 AM AEST
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ahh cynthia, the beginning of the poem brought tears to my eyes; made me miss my hubby really bad, but the end made me smile, i thought it was cute, ahh tis a weird mood im in, hugs n' love ya nessa
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Re: ++~ My Beloved ~++
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:37:25 PM AEST
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ok girl thats just friggin creepy.
i loved this!! i think rita is worried about you though lol .
well done.
Arden |
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