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Trapped
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:43:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel trapped by my life.
You cant escape yourself.
Everytime I sit alone, I feel swamped by loneliness.
Like a black cloud hanging over me,
Waiting, waiting, until Im on my own.
Then it suffocates me,
Enclosing its sticky walls around me,
Until I cannot breathe or fight it.
I have to collapse, give in to it.
My enemy and yet my only friend.
When there is no-one there for me,
The sticky walls can be comforting.
You cant escape yourself.
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Re: Trapped
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:17:38 PM AEST
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Awwww this was so sad. Lonliness is so hard sometimes. You expressed it so wonderfully in your poem.
Kie |
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Re: Trapped
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:30:43 PM AEST
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Loneliness has been a friend and an enemy to me too... I can relate to the emotions felt here... I've felt them at one time or another in my life as well...
Very well expressed... I'm very impressed...
keep on writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Trapped
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:19:21 AM AEST
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I'm sorry that loneliness is such a big part of your life, I hope that you can find someone special to share your life with. Even though its a a horrible thing to feel you expressed it brilliantly here. Keep it up.
- Stacy |
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Re: Trapped
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by mickie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:42:55 AM AEST
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| you're right. you can't escape yourself. that's why you have to rise above yourself and believe that you will see another day. i personally understand the grief and despair you are going through. i myself have been in that black cloud for three years running. i made up an agreement to life and signed my name three times. i really have only me. that's how i feel. please keep in touch. i will tell you more about myself. try and make you feel safe talking. promise. keep trying. never be afraid to tell how you feel. negative or postive. but believe you can overcome. |
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Re: Trapped
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by surfer_boy_lost on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 01:12:09 AM AEST
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| it amazing to find someone else that seems to unerstand how lonliness is suffocating, yet it can be so addicative when the only person you want can't come, can't ease you. then all you are left with is the lonliness which is always there. sleep is the most lonely time of all. |
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Re: Trapped
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by meowmix_2011 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:50:29 PM AEST
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| hi diamond tears your poem is good better than my poem my poem is called trapped too.O I got to go.Bye meow Meowmix_2011 |
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Re: Trapped
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by diamond_tears on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:30:33 AM AEST
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| this poem is now being published in an anthology called Circle of Lif- out on October 1st for 15.99!! WOO HOO!!! |
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