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+~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:28:41 PM in AEST
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As I struggled to get back up on my feet,
I see a shadow quickly fly past me,
"Who's there?"
Dead silence.
The rain starts to drip onto my face,
I huddle in the corner,
I see eyes peering at me
from the darkness.
The rain starts to pour,
my eyes are covered by my drenched hair,
I feel hot breath on one side
of my neck,
then....
I feel skin being torn away
from my body.
I scream out in agony,
but there's nobody around
to hear my mournful cries.
I look up and there must be at least...
a dozen or so vampires surrounding me.
What did I do to deserve this?
The ground soaks with my blood,
the rain carries it down the
small slope in the alleyway.
It must have been their voices
I heard in the dead of darkness.
They stand over me
waiting for me to cross over
to their world....
the world of the living dead.
I could feel my body
being changed from human,
to being an immortal.
I was the thirst for their hunger,
they hunted me down
and turned me into one of them....
one of the living dead.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.26/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-27 16:28:41]
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:46:37 PM AEST
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awesome cynthia.
a really liked this.
well done my friend.
you do dark best.
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:51:27 PM AEST
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WoW Sis This Is Really Good Hun..I Love It !!!!You Do So Well At Anything You Write ....
You Have That Special Talent .....Keep Em Coming :-) Love Ya Sis !!!!!!!!!!!
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by dead_beauty on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:59:42 PM AEST
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| Vampires always make for a interesting poem! This one was very tasty! :)~ravenghost |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:59:48 PM AEST
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Cynthia~
I could feel the darkness... and the dread... as I crossed over into the night of the living dead...
Good write... good ending... seems thoough it need something more though... not sure what... but overall Good job! Loved it...
It reminds me of something we had to do in English comp one time... where we were given a story to a point... then we had to finish it...
Keep on writing girl... this is what u were destined to do...
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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"The rain starts to pour,
my eyes are covered by my drenched hair,
I feel hot breath on one side
of my neck,
then....
I feel skin being torn away
from my body."
Terrifying yet to delightful to stop reading!
I think you have found your calling.
Kie
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:23:20 PM AEST
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| this is epic, Dante would be proud. |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:49:53 PM AEST
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omg, omg, omg, I want my Mommy! Cynthia, you just do this too darn well.
Shaking . . .
Rita |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:20:35 PM AEST
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excellent ending cynthia! lol@rita hehe, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:00:18 AM AEST
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| Aww..its wonderful..welldone cynthia..venkat |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (Pt.2)
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:27:38 PM AEST
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Ahhh.... part two! =)
Excellently done Cynthia!
Love,
Ellen |
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