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Falling
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The walls I have built up for so many years
Are falling apart
The fighting is continuing
Even though the walls aren’t together
The cracks
They are getting bigger
I can’t stop them
The glue won’t stick
Please
Some one help me
The foundation isn’t strong enough to hold the weight
HELP ME
February 7th 2000
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lil_angel
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2004-04-27 16:07:27] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:54:17 PM AEST (User
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Lil angel, I liked this. You're a good poetess. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:04:38 PM AEST (User
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This was good.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:26:39 AM AEST (User
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hum, i get mad crazy instutional thougths from reading this... "no! the house is falling! augh!" sorry... it's late... lol, good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:20:59 AM AEST (User
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I like it... :) |
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by mickie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:08:47 AM AEST (User
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if you want me to help.. just tell me how. let me start by saying, you will make it. about 5 yrs. ago my life was crumbling. i was on the verge of sadness, grief, and a whole lot of things. i okay now, for the most part, but i want you to know you will make it. you have to. and i will help you. keep in touch with me
please. i'll tell you some more about myself. be encouraged. |
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:57:28 AM AEST (User
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I tend to look at walls falling as a good thing. :) They open up the world to new places, and expose one to new situations.
I would have told you then--go ahead and break...you would be suprised how friends and new friends come to help when one falls apart!
Sometimes suprisingly, people care. |
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