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Betrayal Of A Friend

Contributed by discantbelife on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Betrayal is written all over your face,
You can't speak,
I know what you have done
i didn't think
Your *** would have been the one,
You laugh and smile in my ******* face,
But you laid with him,
With out remorse,
Thought,
Even to say the less love.

You b*tch i knew you had you eyes on him,
Now you all happy cause you think you win,
I'm not the type to fight over and man,
But you deserve an ***whopping.
I'm going to come at you when you least expect it,
And ******* him,
You gonna regent it.

Betrayal is written all over you face,
But i'm just give you taste,
You gonna see
That you should never messed with
Me

Copyright © discantbelife ... [ 2004-04-27 15:56:32]
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Re: Betrayal Of A Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:34:20 PM AEST
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Such anger! Well done though!

Re: Betrayal Of A Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:30:07 PM AEST
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i KNOW HOW YOU FEEL. BUT REVENGE DOESN'T SOLVE ANTHING IT JUST CAUSES MORE PROBLEMS. IF HE CHEATED, HE REALLY DIDN'T LOVE YOU FROM THE BEGINNING. YOU DESERVE SOMEONE YOU CAN TRUST. ONCE THAT TRUST IS BROKEN THE RELATIONSHIP IS OVER BECAUSE YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO TRUST HIM AGAIN.
SORRY TO BE SO BLOUNT.

GWENMARIE

Re: Betrayal Of A Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:23:52 AM AEST
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wish i had the stamina back in my time to move around these themes and think this way, powerful writing... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Betrayal Of A Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Cursed_Witch on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:31:05 PM AEST
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hahah now that i know, ill never get close to UR man :P hah

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