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Faded
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:45:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I looked into the mirror what did I see?
I seen a girl but she isnt me.
Her eyes are colder than the night.
Only when she smiles is it ever bright.
She looked up at the sky what did she see?
She seen the stars brighter than she.
She yelled out I wish I was dead
but a tear she never shed.
Never did she want to stay
Never did she want the light of day
Hear me out she would say
All I want to do is live if I may?
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MysticFireFairy
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2004-04-27 15:45:08]
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Re: Faded
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:51:16 PM AEST
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| Really well done! |
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Re: Faded
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:54:17 PM AEST
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oh wow!!!
im speechless.
this was beyond amazing!
i loved this. the rhyme was perfect.
cant wait to see more.
Arden |
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Re: Faded
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:30:43 PM AEST
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This is great, I look forward to reading more of your poems.
P.S. Here's a belated welcome to YPDC.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Faded
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:25:40 PM AEST
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Good Poem.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Faded
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:15:51 AM AEST
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huh, reminds me of some pointed messages i caught ear to in the past... i'm keen on this, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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