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I'm not so niave
Contributed by
Rhei76
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I've got to say
I love you always
And today
I've seen my discovered lies
My made up alibi
My infamous colored skies
Right there on the line
And I don't mind
I know you do
You know now what is true
I'm still a child, a boy
I need you
To break me
To help me thru
I love you always
And today
I know you have no reason to believe
It's okay, I'm okay
One day, one day
You will see
I'm not so niave
I'm not so brave
It's okay you got your life
Mine is right over here
Striving to learn
And understand
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-04-27 15:44:57]
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Re: I'm not so niave
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:48:45 PM AEST
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| This is really well done! Great job! |
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Re: I'm not so niave
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:08:34 PM AEST
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Aww love is so hard sometimes.....
I thought you constructed this poem well.
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Re: I'm not so niave
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:13:51 AM AEST
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huh... i liked this one! paints a good picture for growing in adolescence, or however you spell that confounded word... lol, good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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