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Beautiful Pain
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:54:15 PM in AEST
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Beautiful Pain
The deathly black which covers your soul
Conceals not from me your beauty within
And the glare in your eyes does not succeed
In hiding the sparkle deep therein
I wish I could show you just how much I love you
And we’ve etched each other with this beautiful pain
Shared everything that matters
Nothing to lose, everything to gain
A sacred love springing from our insanity
I can’t let myself ever let you go
(And the stars shine upon your tainted skin)
My love, with a scarred heart to show
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afraid_of_fear
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2004-04-27 14:54:15]
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:56:59 PM AEST
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| oh wow...what an amazing poem...so beautifully written...well done |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:08:20 PM AEST
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ohhh charlotte this was amazing!!
and about time you wrote somthing girl!
i love this. im in awe at your talent.
well done.
Becky |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:25:23 PM AEST
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heartfelt, beautifully genuine poem charlotte, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:28:59 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:58:08 PM AEST
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| I am mesmerised by your writes....good flow. |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by blueheart on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:09:17 AM AEST
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Charlotte, this was so wonderful.
You only get better and better in your writes. This is one of my favorite poems. You mixed love and darkness so well. Awesome. |
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