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fakeness
Contributed by
little_genna
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:18:29 AM in AEST
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Smiles and continuous laughter.
Nothing could be harder,
Ribs and sides ache.
Tears in the eyes pool like lakes.
Looking so happy and beautiful.
Completely forgetting to be careful.
Eyes so shiney and bright.
Your smile brings such light.
Light hearted banter.
Couldn't imagine being any sadder.
Cannot hide,
So much I have lied,
And cried.
Only few see through my fakeness.
Makes me feel complete emptiness
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little_genna
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2004-04-27 10:18:29]
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Re: fakeness
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by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:32:56 AM AEST
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i know its hard but hey...your better at it than me,
Luv always
:D
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Re: fakeness
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:58:06 AM AEST
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Nothing wrong with a smile and a little banter however serious the situation may be. I enjoyed your poem and yes I did smile as I read it.
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Re: fakeness
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:44:57 PM AEST
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| loved your poem...it's good to joke...laughter is great medicine |
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