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Little Boy
Contributed by
jonteD
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As the little boy began to cry,
A tear escaped from his eye,
Why do these things occur,
No one can be sure.
The sky dark, full of rain,
Small boy, heart of pain,
The window to nowhere,
He will stay awhile and stare.
Touch not, leave to his mind,
A sobbing child, seems unkind,
Tears one day will wash away,
Be assured, but not today.
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jonteD
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2004-04-27 09:13:25]
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Re: Little Boy
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:46:10 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful piece, absolutely beautiful. |
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Re: Little Boy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:27:15 PM AEST
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A little girl also shares your tears,
She is hurting, she has fears.
Maybe soon the pain will go away,
But also, I fear, it won't be today.
(Sorry I missed you yesterday..I fell asleep)
Hugs Jon....
Jenni
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Re: Little Boy
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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aww this is so sad.. but very, very good.. i really like the simplicity within each line, it seems to make the whole subject and message even more powerful.. good stuff..
charlotte x_x_x |
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