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Like Fine Porcelian
Contributed by
Justalady
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:59:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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She has a figure like an hour-glass,
somewhat showy...but with class.
Admired by all, whenever they wander past.
She has a special beauty, tho even more is held inside,
artists cature softness when their brush strokes are applied,
showing not only her grace, but also lofty pride.
Like fine porcelian, that in moonlight....always somehow glows,
is she a lovely lady....is that what you suppose?
No, she's the pretty vase, that holds a fragrant rose.
Author: June E. Miller (Justalady)
9/14/2002
Copyright ©
Justalady
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2004-04-27 08:59:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Like Fine Porcelian
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:46:41 PM AEST (User
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great poem...i love the way you write |
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Re: Like Fine Porcelian
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:01:56 AM AEST (User
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Well done..it is lovely..venkat |
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Re: Like Fine Porcelian
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tinkkerbelle on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:27:50 PM AEST (User
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Very true to life. |
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Re: Like Fine Porcelian
(User Rating: 1 ) by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:57:39 AM AEST (User
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very nice. now i'll have to try to draw a vase to match the poem...
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Like Fine Porcelian
(User Rating: 1 ) by Louby on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:34:54 PM AEST (User
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Hi.
I really like this... it kind of fools you into thinking it is a love poem. It still is, in a way, a love poem about an object!
Thanks,
Lx |
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