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Play For Me
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:28:48 AM in AEST
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Let this day take leave,paint my soul for just a while
Tempt me into places where naked is the smile
Fresh as birth,my whispers,will caress a tune of love
So play for me this moment,let my soul soar high above
Way beyond imaginings,dreams that float unreal
Where everything is us,and filled with all we feel
Gentle is the breeze as it sends to me,a song
Dressed in silky sighs,my whispers hum along
Eyes closed and senses open,to the wonder of your touch
Tingling sensations fill me with this heated rush
Dancing through the corridors of rooms within my mind
I melt within the magic,carefree redefined
Somewhere from the rainbow,you appear within mind's sight
I meditate in your direction,wrapped within your light
Carried on the sounds of your heartbeat and guitar
As you play for me,my soul its soars,and sets me where you are
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lovingwhispers
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2004-04-27 08:28:48]
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Re: Play For Me
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:46:36 AM AEST
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Beautiful dancing and flowing poem. Keep it up.
Greetz,
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Re: Play For Me
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:53:50 AM AEST
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Lovingwhispers this is such a beautiful poem.
Exquisitely written.
Such flow and rythm to it.
Very nicely done. |
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Re: Play For Me
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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exquisite
Shari |
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Re: Play For Me
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:20:12 AM AEST
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| very exquisite poem..as usual a wonderful flow..venkat |
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Re: Play For Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:05:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful and dreamy. I fell under its spell. Well done.
Andrew |
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