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tainted blood

Contributed by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:52:47 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You walk forward to me
Your aura rushing over me
You present a rose
It is black, black as you
The thorns tear my side
As I stand
You slash me with your blade of lust
You lean close to me and say
Do you love me?
You kiss me
I feel your teeth rip into my lips
As you taste my blood you ask
Do you love me?
I look at you
You smile and again you cut
You cut and cut
Deeper and deeper
Until the ground is thick
The ground is thick my murky, dark blood
I fall to my knees and stare into your eyes
I bleed, as the world fades from me you ask
Do you love me?




Copyright © Dizza_13 ... [ 2004-04-27 07:52:47]
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Re: tainted blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:11:43 AM AEST
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Wow, very dark and piercing. Good stuff...
Greetz,
Hur


Re: tainted blood (User Rating: 1 )
by SugimotoYouki on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:39:11 AM AEST
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dark, intense...
greatly written


Re: tainted blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:57:07 AM AEST
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Wow, this was a truly dark piece.
I like the vividness of the writing.
Nice, very nicely done.


Re: tainted blood (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:48:12 PM AEST
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very dark...i loved it though...you write so well


Re: tainted blood (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:25:39 PM AEST
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WoW Dizza This Is Really Dark And Intense Write....Love It !!!!!!!! Written So Well Keep Em Coming......
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