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Just before staples removed
Contributed by
Rhei76
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:50:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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My Hate
Pain
Feelings of Shame
Will soon be shed
Spike my black caffine
With a bowl and nicotine
Still chasing sleep and space
Feeling relaxed and intriqued
Just before staples removed
Copyright ©
Rhei76
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2004-04-27 07:50:42]
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Re: Just before staples removed
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:28:09 AM AEST
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| this was ok, i feel it could of been better, if it had more length, and the last line made more sense, the mistery of it made it good though x |
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Re: Just before staples removed
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 08:21:16 PM AEST
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| It seems like you are writing about a very personal experience. I didn't quite understand it, but maybe if you elaborate more the poem will be more understandable to outsiders. |
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Re: Just before staples removed
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:40:51 AM AEST
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was this about surgery?
thanks for sharing |
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