|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I am alone
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:49:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
They say that I am not alone,
What is the matter with them?
Is their hearts made of stone?
They think of me like an Item.
My mother slowly went away,
I really did hate her much.
Even I wish she could stay,
I hated every one little touch.
So lonely that is really me,
left alone in a big house to cry.
I wish that people could see,
that I really want to die.
The one thing to drown my sorrow,
is that last purely nice breath.
I hope there will be no tomorrow,
the simple answer is death.
Copyright ©
gothicangel
... [
2004-04-27 04:49:15]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I am alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:37:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| We all feel or are alone all the time, and sometimes death is the only answer, you potray this perfectly. |
|
|
Re: I am alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:02:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Death isn't the answer for lonliness.
You have enormous talent, use that to express your inner feelings like you just did.
What is obvious to us, sometimes isn't obvious to those around us. Never give up on yourself and never give up on life. Because even when it looks bleak at the moment, who knows what is around the next corner that could completely transform your life and fill that lonliness.
You hang in there. Keep on writing and i'll keep on reading. If you need someone to talk to, come say hi anytime.
Kie |
|
|
Re: I am alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:11:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i know it doesnt help when people say you are not alone...i have been here. just recently in fact. i do understand how it feels. and i know that it feels that there is no other way out.
i know this doesnt really help, but if you need to talk just let me know. pm me or email me or anything.
but please make sure before you do anything.
i hope you feel better soon. phil |
|
|
Re: I am alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:48:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is very good. YOu are in very good touch with your emotions. |
|
|
Re: I am alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by mickie on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:19:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i know what you feel. i ahve such deep, hurtful feelings, that i think that only death will bring relief. i have had a knife, pills, i just know how you feel. if you wanna know more or just talk, contact me, please. maybe i can help you. stay strong,okay? i may not know you but i already believe in you. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
