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MY LIL WIND CHIME IN MY MIND
Contributed by
luckywinch5
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:46:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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MY LIL WIND CHIME IN MY MIND....
MY LIL WIND CHIME SO VERY DEVINE A MEMORY THAT PLAYS ON AND ON. IN MY MIND! OF SPECIAL TIMES. MY CHILD MADE MY WIND CHIME ESPECIALLY FOR ME. IN A TIME OF LOSS when FREEDOMS NOT...
FOR ALL THE WORLD TO HEAR AND SEE! A REMINDER OF HER SPIRIT! THE CLOSE NOT FORGOTTEN MEMORIES OF THE PASSING PLACE IN TIMES.
SHE HAS GIVEN ME A PIECE OF LIFE BACK WITH HER LITTLE CHIME...A REMEMBERANCE WITHIN AND CARRY ON THROUGH TIMES.
TO KNOW SHE'S HERE! REGARDLESS OF THE COURTS.. IT PLAYS ON THROUGH THE YEARS.
SO MY LIL WIND CHIME PLAYS ALL DAY THEN AT NIGHT WITH EACH BREEZE OR WIND IN TIMES. IT BRINGS ME CONFORT, THAT LAY AT REST, TIL AGAIN A NEW DAY TO PLAY AT BEST!
MY LIL WIND CHIME, VERY DEVINE DINGS AND RINGS RINGS A DING, LIKE A LALA BYE. IN MY MIND!
A VERY MERRY TUNE FOR YOU AND ME TO HEAR.
TO SHARE AND CHEER IN MEMORIES!
TO THE PASSER BYES. WE SHARE WITH YOU OUR DEVINE MEMORY FOREVER SO TRUE..OF THAT A LITTLE WIND CHIME........THE VOICE IN SONG BY TUNE SO TRUE OF A CHIME SO VERY DEVINE LEAVES A WONDER WHAT I WOULD DO? WITHOUT MY LIL EXSISTING CHIME IN MY MIND!
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Re: MY LIL WIND CHIME IN MY MIND
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:58:41 AM AEST
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I have to tell you that I loved the title and the overall feel of the poem. The downside for me was your use of caps. It took away from the perfection. I thought if it were placed into tidy stanzas and written in a regular script it would have been perfect.
I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Re: MY LIL WIND CHIME IN MY MIND
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:39:29 PM AEST
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it's good work
and i enjoyed reading it but i also agree with Kie |
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