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She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:21:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She loves me
She says
But I feel so lost
And I'm trying to wait for her
But at my own cost?
She loves him too
And this kills me inside
I try to bite my tongue
But my jealous need I can't hide
And she just can't decide
No she just can't decide
But in this limbo of time
I'm left to wither and die
She loves me not
No chance left for me
I'm sure my hope is false
And my pride cannot see
She loves me
Please let this be
She loves me not
And I just do not see
So the pedals fall away
And they are ripped one by one
Desperately, hopefully watching
Put my faith in our love
My faith in..
She loves me
She loves me not
She loves
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lostinlimbo
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2004-04-27 02:21:48]
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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:55:50 AM AEST
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What a journey you took my mind on with this poem. Painful.
A very unique poem and I liked the way you constructed it.
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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
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by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:59:33 AM AEST
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heartbreaking poem
very nicely written |
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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:36:57 PM AEST
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Aww, that's really sad. It was really well writen though. Nice piece.
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Re: She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not
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by BrokenHeartedLass on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:21:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. She is stupid to not love you. You're just easy to love,
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