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Morning Roses
Contributed by
Chanti
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:20:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Every 'vow' you made,
you say was a mistake,
he'd bring you roses in the morning,
they're plastic and fake,
was the scent of love flowers,
ever real,
wither and die away,
now i know how they feel,
hang the roses to dry,
so forever they'll last,
press them in a book,
to bookmark our past,
watch your happy marriage,
slowly decay,
but like everything else,
you threw it away,
and like everything else,
i feel thrown away.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2004-04-27 00:20:34]
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Re: Morning Roses
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:57:49 AM AEST
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I felt every word........you see years ago I too divorced........and my son was young.......he is my life and I told him so.......I have never been out of his sight for a day......so I hope one of your parents and even both...feel toward you as I do my son.......you are the most important one.
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Re: Morning Roses
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:18:58 AM AEST
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I'm really sorry that your parents wouldnt work things out. And I hope you start to feel a little better soon. It was a really good write.
- Stacy |
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Re: Morning Roses
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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Awww i'm so sorry to hear about your parents. It has to be a tough time for you. You expressed all your pain so beautifully in this poem.
You touched my heart.
Kie |
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Re: Morning Roses
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by wild_girl121 on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 11:21:46 AM AEST
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yeah i know how that is.. my parents arent together , i just had to wait it out and now everythings better. but theyre still divorced.
- life throws stuff at you that you cant always dodge-
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