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Did I Dream
Contributed by
outsider
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 05:59:35 AM in AEST
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I asked myself all day
Did I dream.
At the time it seemed so real,
The stuff of dreams thats true
But real.
I remembered every aspect in rapturous detail.
The warmth and the taste
The sounds and the aromas.
You looked as though you had an aura around you,
A living breathing angel in my arms.
A tiny eternity passed and you were gone,
And I was left with the memories of you.
But then I asked myself
Did I dream you too?
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Re: Did I Dream
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:14:56 AM AEST
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| oh this was just lovely, lets hope it wasnt just a dream. |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 06:41:02 AM AEST
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I love everything about this one. The pace and tone of it all feels just right. Shove it up to join my favs of yours!
Chrissie x |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:33:12 AM AEST
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| Oh I hope it wasn't a dream, but if it was I hope it returns to give you another smile... |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 01:12:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful ...yet sad.
Excellent write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by Lovingangel4u on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 04:41:19 PM AEST
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| Its wasnt :)) ILUVM |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by Opium on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 08:32:43 PM AEST
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| Pas mal ...pas mal du tout |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by DrogedaRain on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 06:02:53 AM AEST
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| So glad I found this one~! Everything happens for a reason~! Oh so sweet this poem is~! |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:54:25 AM AEST
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| I like this poem. its really good and sad. good job and keep writing |
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Re: Did I Dream
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:58:39 PM AEST
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OoOoOoOoOoO.... nice poem. I always think that if I meet someone that I love so dearly and stuff, that I must have dreamed it because I do not usually have amazing people step into my life... great write...
Jodi |
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