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Past the Line
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:12:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Past the Line
The future holds
What we do not know
The world only knows
What it's been told
What's in store
Is for no one to know
The final ending score
To the death toll
Life goes on
In circles and ovals
But death goes in a line
If you cross that line
You are lost to the unknown
And if you never cross
You are stuck as you are
It's a lose, lose situation
You'll never know the answers
To your wondering
You are crawling
Away from your obligation
To live without regrets
You are running away
From everything
You need to turn around
See what you're missing out on
Because once you leave
You can never go back
You're in the great beyond
Past this drawn in line
That fate drew in the sand
Once you leave
You'll see everything
With clarity you'll know
What life you've given up on
And you'll live with regret
In eternity's grace
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essentially9
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2004-04-26 22:12:00]
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Re: Past the Line
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by mysticaldancer on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 04:09:10 PM AEST
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| what a good poem! i'm shocked that not many people have read it. |
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Re: Past the Line
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:47:25 AM AEST
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with a little polish, you've got a masterpiece.
great sentiment.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Past the Line
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by blackmarker on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:27:53 PM AEST
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| Wonderful.. just simply amazing. I'm surprised its been read so little, I think it's fantastic. |
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