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Little Red Robin
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:52:27 PM in AEST
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I saw a little robin fly high against the sky
it soared above the mountains and touch the clouds up high
It brought songs of splendid memories and springtime melodies
It took away our sorrows and reminded me of thee
Its wings had set a flutter like a beating heart
It danced around so freely that I hope we'd never part
The trees are filled with flowers that allow the bird to nest
And bring about the little ones to sing with all the rest
The little ones keep chirpin until spring is in full bloom
Leaving all the winter days behind with all the gloom....
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-04-26 21:52:27]
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:09:51 PM AEST
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| Excellent write! Wonderfully done!~ |
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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awww this was so beautiful.
the imagery was amazing. just lovely.
well done keep it up.
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:44:14 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, Jenn. I love sunshiny anything. Happy happy is my motto. Arden just made me write a dark poem, can you believe that???? Give me a chirping robin over a death scythe anytime. This really is so delightful. Lady after my own heart.
Hugs.
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:59:28 PM AEST
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Beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 11:58:25 PM AEST
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very pretty jenny, i love this line,"Its wings had set a flutter like a beating heart"...so charming:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:17:46 AM AEST
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| very beautiful..quite refreshing..venkat |
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:01:35 AM AEST
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Just for words like that....is why I come in to read. Beautiful!!!!
Thank you so very much. |
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:27:16 AM AEST
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PRETTY POEM JENNY! I COULD SEE WHAT I WAS READING & ABLE TO TAKE IN FULL VIEW!! GREAT ONE!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:28:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful and sweet...
I love robins, it's such a shame they only stay in the Netherlands during winter and fly to Russia as soon as spring begins...
Greetz,
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Re: Little Red Robin
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:29:06 AM AEST
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If there is anything more beautiful to write about than nature I do NOT want to know. Every spring I wait eagerly to see a robins fat breast. Because I know when I see a little chubby robin that spring time and babies are right around the corner. What a wondrous poem you have written.
Kie |
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