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~Losing Someone Like You~

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:17:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Every since the day we met...
You've been a part of me
You've made my life a symphony...
With those words of love...
Your lips... ever so softly... whispered to my heart
They danced off the tip of your tongue... ever so gently
To dance right within the depths of my heart... so free
You mean so much more than the world to me...
'Cause you're my everything...

~Losing someone like you~

I struggle... day and night... with your memory...
Every time... I close my eyes... you're right there by my side
Just waiting for me... in my dreams
You take me to the edge of someplace...
I've always wanted to be...
To a place... where we can... cast aside our frowns and fears of love...
Like yesterday's cheap wine

~Losing someone like you~

Your heart beats in tune with mine
A hymn of love... so divine...
One we must never... never let end....
As the real music of our love begins...

~Losing someone like you~

Now your beauty is everywhere...
In every place... on every face I see...
Hauntingly... staring back at me

~Losing someone like you~

You're in the changing seasons...
With no rhyme or reason...
Spring to summer... summer to fall... fall to winter's chill...
As your body grows so weaker still...

~Losing someone like you~

You're in the depths of this storm... raging inside of me...
Standing in the eye of it...
I can't resist your beauty...
But I can't break free from it...
I've become a part of the violent rhythm...
The howling winds of rage... blowing inside of me...

~Losing someone like you~

This is the rhythm of my inner song...
Being played out of tune...
So it has no rhythm at all...
Without you...

~Losing some one like you~

The anthem carried in the tune...
The rhythm of the sprit of love...
From which you were born...
No longer exists...
Not even in the twisted mists of the rising sun...
Without you...

Losing someone like you...
It's the hardest thing... I've ever been through
Now... I don't know what I'll do...
After losing... someone... like... you....

~Losing someone like you~




Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-04-26 21:17:05]
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Re: ~Losing Someone Like You~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:35:04 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifull.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
yo momma,
emy


Re: ~Losing Someone Like You~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:43:01 PM AEST
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Donna, this is such a sad write, but yet, I found it beautiful. Excellent. *S* Cynthia




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