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+~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:34:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's a cold windy night
there is a storm brewing,
I walk down a lonely street,
there isn't anyone in sight.
I feel an eerie presence,
my stomach feels a little unsettled,
my heart and soul tell me
I'm not supposed to be here.
I hear footsteps behind me,
I don't stop to look,
I keep walking faster,
the footsteps get louder,
I turn to look....
nothing.
Is it my mind playing tricks on me?
Probably.
Maybe it's the wind howling,
I try to convince myself that it is.
I start walking again,
then....
I hear voices, unknown voices.
What are they saying?
My ears start to ring,
I'm overcome with fear,
I start to run....
the voices get louder,
then are muffled by the strong wind.
"What do you want?" I screamed out,
but the voices don't answer me.
I try to find somewhere to hide,
I run into a densely lit alleyway,
I run into a brick wall
and it knocks me down.
To be continued.........
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.26/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-26 20:34:00]
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:41:27 PM AEST
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Wow, Cynthia, this is the first dark poetry I've seen out of you.... I'm dumbfounded by my own curiosity =)
You did splendidly (I'll keep my eyes peeles for the parts to come) ; )
Love,
Ellen |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by TruBlueLove on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:42:56 PM AEST
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| its seems likes its right out of a horror movie mixed with my worst nightmares... cant wait to read the rest!!! |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:45:00 PM AEST
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Ah, the dark conspirator has struck again, I see. Beware, a new demon from the depths is arising as we speak. A new hell will be born soon and all will bathe in the river of Styx to become one to the new leader of the Dark.
Good poem, btw,
Rita |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:48:35 PM AEST
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| can't wait for part two |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by secretwind on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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| Oh this is nice and spooky, a eerie tale well done. Excellent.... |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:36:49 PM AEST
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Cynthia...
Hey... write dark poetry now...hmmmm...
There's a couple of words I'd change or leave out... but hey... that's just me... overall great poem girl...
Dark... errie... spooky...
Can't wait for part 2...lol
~Donna~ |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by arden on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:44:29 PM AEST
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lol im sorry but i found the last 2 lines really really funny lol
i cant wait for the second part though!
Arden |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by Rylo on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:37:55 PM AEST
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| This was really good, I can't wait for the rest of it. Keep them coming, you have a great talent. |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:23:17 AM AEST
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vivid..its a beautiful piece..I will await pt.2
venkat |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:31:23 AM AEST
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HOW MEAN OF YOU CYNTHIA! ENDING A GREAT POEM RIGHT THERE!! NOW WE GOTTA WAIT TO READ THE REST,BUT IN ALL I'M SURE IT'LL TURN OUT TO BE THE BEST!!! COOL ONE!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:26:39 AM AEST
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| well written, this really happened to me, sans the brick wall, comment to be continued............... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:23:41 AM AEST
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Dark and chilling...I will reread this beauty again before I go and see 'Dawn of the Dead' in cinema!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by bleeding_chains on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:46:05 AM AEST
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| this is an excellent poem. |
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Re: +~+ The Living Dead +~+ (pt.1)
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:56:29 PM AEST
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This Is Great Sis Dark And Chilling... I Didn't Even See This Part 1Though LoL ...
Oh Well I'm Half Backwards At Times Anyway LoL....
Love It Sis Awesome Dark Write...Keep Em Coming !!!!!! Love Ya
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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