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Angel From My Nightmare
Contributed by
blueheart
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:04:58 PM in AEST
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She emerges silently from the ashes down below,
And afloat she stays in her cascading black robe,
The silence she uses to gnaw through my mind,
With ease she releases the insanity she finds,
Sadistic fingers tighten their grasp around my neck,
Her sinister eyes announce the first of her attack,
She drags me away, mauling my comfort zone,
The angel from my nightmare has come to take me home.
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:15:52 PM AEST
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I have had dreams similiar and I wake up literally screaming. I know for a fact that nightmares can seem very real. Not dream like at all. Petrifying!
You took me inside your poem and I'm running out already....
Loved this one..
Kie |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:24:14 PM AEST
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| Haughtinly beautiful |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:48:26 PM AEST
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How about hauntingly beautiful? Or maybe chilling to the bone? Or chilling to the mine, body and soul? Whatever... you did a masterful job with this one... THUMBS UP!!!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:47:53 AM AEST
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hanna this is excellent and oooo kinda creepy! lol, very dark, i love it:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:05:27 PM AEST
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oh this was awesome!!
so dark and chilling and just wow!
i loved it.
hope to see more like this.
Arden |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:15:44 AM AEST
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wow hanna, this is incredible.. i was going to choose a favourite line, but i love them all, every line is perfect! excellent stuff..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:24:22 AM AEST
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| Sounds beautifully eerie... hehe :-) good work! |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:01:04 AM AEST
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| WOW!!!!!!!!! This is incredible. I loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:23:13 AM AEST
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| What black deeds have you done to be fettered by such an angel dark-inclined. Like a mother coming to the playground on evenings late taking her littel ones home though they struggle to stay you have been taken home by this angel for what crimes have you partaken... have you perhaps stayed out too late st a C.C perhaps....LOL ha ha ha,, a rather chilling tale of an angel with such darkly tenure,,on woders for what crice indeed...anayway nicely written and done... I am shivering even now. |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:23:23 PM AEST
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Very creative write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:09:42 AM AEST
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| creepy...... thats not cool at all... someone taking you from you comfort zone thats scary stuff .......... i mean really ... especially if its that thing... person or watever you want to call it... angel from your nightmare..nicely done tho... def. gave me chills. |
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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Im speechless, this poem has such a wonderful rythme that is constant throught out the poem. You kept the words flowing so nicely too. the poem as a whole just grasped me and now I cant let go of the whole idea.
Well done
Kisses,
~Soulless~
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Re: Angel From My Nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:46:08 AM AEST
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Home? Dark and sensuous, yet menacing and sinuous, blueheart.
I like this one. It possesses a brooding and aggraphobic [sic?] quality, which the best nightmares have . . . for those whom enjoy nightmares, that is.
Thanks for sharing. |
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