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Caverns of Cold
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:38:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The cradle of life is bleeding.
My soul is seeping through.
My breath catches you.
The frost has fallen.
Many people have died.
What do you search for.
Is it love,
Theres only pain here.
Its the only thing you can really confide in.
Chaos and turmult and what not.
Very shortly youll see.
Wasted hours of prayer.
Your blood on the ground.
Isnt that a pretty sight.
How about your brain removed.
My hands that you created.
The perfect abortion.
Yes do you remember,
How about the music.
Deathly disturbing isnt it.
Do you like the way the organ grinds.
Your lost.
A wreck.
Your not worth saving
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-04-26 19:38:43]
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Re: Caverns of Cold
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by TruBlueLove on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:36:00 PM AEST
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| very darkly beautiful (if that makes sense)... its as if you wrote down my nightmares |
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Re: Caverns of Cold
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:09:16 AM AEST
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Wonderfully dark write. Mastered the pure deepness of hatred.
Lindsey |
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Re: Caverns of Cold
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:21:14 AM AEST
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This is morbidly amazing. I love the descriptions, the elaborate words that bring images into every mind. Beautiful, Mortis.
Lindsey |
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Re: Caverns of Cold
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:46:16 PM AEST
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I love the taste of your poetry, so here I am back for more. Every poem takes a different place in my mind. All bitter sweet.
Beautiful once again.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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