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i feel
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A tear slices down my face,
I feel it with full embrace,
I feel it like a knife on my back,
I feel it all but pain it lacks,
I feel it like i've felt it before,
I feel it when I hit the floor,
I feel it and it feels good,
I feel it like I knew I would,
I feel it all over again,
I feel it as I use this pen,
I feel it every day and night,
I feel it and it feels right,
I feel like it's really me,
I feel it like it's who i'm gonna be,
I feel it as I calmly cry,
and as I slowly die,
I feel it, and for so long...
Hopefully you feel nothing when your gone.
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2004-04-26 18:51:52]
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Re: i feel
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by Soulless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:57:01 PM AEST
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wonderful writing technique you used, i really like it. But what really caught my attention was the title,
Great job
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: i feel
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by alasdaircairns on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:38:56 PM AEST
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| full of pain and passion. Great write. |
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Re: i feel
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:55:29 PM AEST
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I actually felt this pain.. well done
Liked it a lot
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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