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This Is My Goodbye
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You hurt me can’t you see,
There’s this fire burning inside me.
Why did you have to be like that,
How could you just leave me flat.
I thought you cared more,
But now your only just a whore.
I thought I was the only one,
But now I guess that we are done.
This is my goodbye
I’m tired of you lies.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2004-04-26 18:02:51]
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Re: This Is My Goodbye
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:14:54 PM AEST
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| Very well done! Powerful! and sad! But good job! |
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Re: This Is My Goodbye
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:22:45 PM AEST
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I liked this poem... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! WeLLNeSS has BeEn sPoTTed!
KeeP it ^!
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: This Is My Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:53:08 PM AEST
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| Wow this was a good poem. |
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Re: This Is My Goodbye
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:47:17 PM AEST
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Good for u!
U will come out the winner.
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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