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I Sit Here
Contributed by
diamond_tears
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:47:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit here,
And from my eye rolls a tear.
I sit here,
And everyone walks away, Im left in fear.
I sit here,
And loneliness is the only word i hear.
I sit here,
And so many people are around, yet no-one draws near.
I sit here,
And though my head says "no", I have to perservere.
I sit here,
And I have sat here for many years.
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Re: I Sit Here
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:51:51 PM AEST
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very short and to the point. I've been there before and can relate to the loneliness very well... I hope u no longer feel this way.
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Re: I Sit Here
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by sugar0986 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:05:51 PM AEST
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this was a really good poe, i sorry that you feel this way.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: I Sit Here
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:26:58 PM AEST
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I I Liked this
I can relate
Well done
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: I Sit Here
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by devil_child on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:46:44 PM AEST
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awsome poem, i've never been there before but i've had friends that have. Hope things get better for you
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Re: I Sit Here
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:25:25 PM AEST
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I've been there and done that... and now have friends that are doing the same thing...
It's hard I know... and writing does help... just remember there are ppl who love u... u may not know it though...
The best is yet to come and I hope we hear more from u...
By the way good poem...
~Donna~ |
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