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Self-destruction
Contributed by
XxJesxXx420xX
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I use a knife
to end my life
Stabbing at my wrist
giving it another twist
Blood gushing out
as I scream and shout
But I'm still not dead
and that's what I dread
So now I take some pills
hoping it kills
Now my body's in pain
and I'm going insane
But yet I'm not dead
what else do I need to shed?
I did everything I can think of
all that suicidal stuff
Wait, I just thought of something
that will make me turn to nothing
This idea has to be
this idea will make me see
That death is just a few hours away
and death will just make my day
This will be a little fun
all I need is a shotgun
I'll get it loaded and be ready
and hold it to my head nice and steady
The trigger I see, I will pull
so I can finally reach my goal
5...4...3...2...1...
My life is now finally done
Copyright ©
XxJesxXx420xX
... [
2004-04-26 17:25:22]
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Re: Self-destruction
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM AEST
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| Harsh poem! But well stated! |
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Re: Self-destruction
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by Soulless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:08:34 PM AEST
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Wonderful yet spine tingling. As I was reading this poem I felt a little of the emotion shine throught.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Self-destruction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:40:18 PM AEST
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| This is a well written poem. It stirrs up emotions and makes you think. I like the part about twisting the knife in the wrist it's disgusting but gives good imagery. awsome poem! |
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