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D.I.V.O.R.C.E.
Contributed by
elizabethfusco
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:54:07 PM in AEST
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D is for the darkness that covers my broken home
I is for the insults that they scream so loud
V is for the versions of the story that I'm told
O is for the options that no longer seem to exist
R is for the reality that I wish would go away
C is the comfort that I lost because of this
E is for the ending I really don't want to know
And D.I.V.O.R.C.E. is for the hatred, which is all I know to show.
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elizabethfusco
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2004-04-26 16:54:07]
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Re: D.I.V.O.R.C.E.
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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| Very hard thing to go through! I hope things look up! Very good write though! |
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Re: D.I.V.O.R.C.E.
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:24:56 PM AEST
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This is really sad but written well.
Jus keep writing. It helps and doesn't matter what it's about. It your voice.
Hang in there and jus remember none of this is your fault.
luv, huggs, faith, prayer,
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Re: D.I.V.O.R.C.E.
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by Sinned on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 07:19:01 AM AEST
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Elizabethfusco
A sad,but excelent poem.
Your discription,emotions,and hatred of the event show through.
Divorce was never ment to be,but
there is nothing of fault caused by you.
Human weakness closes many eyes and it is then impossible to see any light.
Pray for and love each of your parents their faults are not yours.
May the peace of Christ be always with you.
A strong poem !
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