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Goodbye
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I want to say goodbye
Goodbye sky in the world above
Goodbye ocean deep below
Goodbye birds
Goodbye fish
Say good-bye to friends so close
Say goodbye to family so far
I tried to say hello
But it is a silent scream
A scream that falls on deaf ears
One set of ears
Please hear me
Please I am all set to go
All set but not ready
I am so young please some one
Hear me
I want to go one
Written on April 18th 1999
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2004-04-26 15:20:21]
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Re: Goodbye
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:36:56 PM AEST
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IT SOUNDS PRETTY CUTE TO ME! WELL WRITTEN FOR THAT AGE & TELLS ALL IT CAN lil_angel!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Goodbye
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:39:51 PM AEST
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| that scared me when i saw the title.. but im glad you dont feel like that now. good write for an 8 year old. *hugs* phil |
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Re: Goodbye
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:48:41 PM AEST
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Wow.... eighth grade huh? =)
Talent early on---- a prodigy! =)
Awesome write
Love,
Ellen |
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