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when lonely rivers die
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:47:52 PM in AEST
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when lonely rivers die,
and birds fly out of their feathers,
as sorrows sweet aroma comes,
beguilement of things forgotten,
these raptures reached to that degree,
pure spirits are fit loves for thee,
tears that the pines have wept,
breathing in an innocent truth,
validating recognition of feelings,
honoring of one's original nature,
consuming rapture in a moments notice,
weeping into the earth's green hair,
our souls begin where they did end,
and the wind in-between the stars,
cries as seas to rivers with softest voice,
allowing all natural expression,
far away from brackish waters,
painting worlds a rosey glow.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by jaeann on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:55:27 PM AEST
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| captivating and beautiful.......your work is amazing....... |
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:03:27 PM AEST
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| I think it is beautiful. |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:23:46 PM AEST
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It's so beautiful!! (the poem, though the pictures are great too). I wish I could step in amid the stars and get lost in that water.
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:36:57 PM AEST
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aww, Nessa *hugs*. This was perfect. Beautiful, tragic... Phenominal.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:41:17 PM AEST
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Beautifully inspiring hun- wow! and the pictures are so perfect *grins*
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 03:41:30 PM AEST
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PRETTY POEM CAPTURES NATURE AS SHE IS! I LIKED IT ALOT!! YOU DID A GREAT JOB-KEEP IT UP!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:11:51 PM AEST
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Oh Lady, This is absolutely breath-taking. Both the pic and the poem.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:15:12 PM AEST
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simply breath taking Nessa
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 04:59:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful, soft & descriptive. You are at your best when describing nature. You leave me in awe. You have a wondrous talent.
Kie |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:11:35 PM AEST
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Aww nessa this is beautiful, i love the vivd imagery within this, something you are the goddess of, a fitting saying would be, simply majestic, tis the best way to desribe the feelings and emotion and beauty within this write
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:36:41 PM AEST
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| Ohhhh Nessa, what a wonderful write my friend. I truly adore the picture. It fits well with the poem. *applauds* Nice work. Keep it up. *S* Cynthia |
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:02:33 PM AEST
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What a poem! It was so soothing and so gorgeously vivid ! Great job!
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 10:28:07 PM AEST
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| you painted such a splendid picture of peace and beauty using such delicate words as your paint.... :) |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 01:02:32 AM AEST
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Stunning picture..breath takingly beatiful flowing poetry..you are a blessing to this site..
"and the wind in-between the stars,
cries as seas to rivers with softest voice"..
wonderful imagery.loved this piece Nessa.:-) venkat
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:09:05 AM AEST
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Wow, this was simply beautiful. The imagery flows so well. Stunning write, superb.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:15:30 AM AEST
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Girlfriend,
this is beautifull. luv the graphics.
keep up the great writing.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:29:48 AM AEST
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Wonderful reverie.
Greetz,
HUr |
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:19:03 PM AEST
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just stunningly beautiful.
loved this.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:47:31 PM AEST
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Awe Nessa This Is So Beautifully Written
I Love The Imagery In This Poem, So Descriptive.....This Is Written So Well !!!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:51:21 PM AEST
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I didnt even bother reading the other coments on this one. No matter what anyone said it wouldnt come close to describing this. I wont insult it with the word beautiful but will simply lay a rose before you and back away.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:12:35 PM AEST
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oh how lovely this one is - so tranquil to pass away into the nature that we are part of - beautiful imagery - peaceful and calming
hugs
merry |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by silent on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:57:49 AM AEST
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Found this a little complex but after reading it 5 times or so i am really blowen away. I can't imagine how you made it fit so well together and the depth of this is amazing. Of all the poems i have read like this, this one stands near the top. Excellent job
Silent |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Baronhawk on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:06:41 AM AEST
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| When lonely rivers die indeed...I had a difficult time with words on this write.. It touched me in ways I cannot bring to be written.. echoing somewhat of tears long forgotten... and brimming full of fears I still hold bidden. Whatever it was this write does bring of...I must say that this is a touching and deepfelt write. Bravo my friend...a great work of art have you framed.....how lonely rivers die...I do hope truths lie elsewhere and without brackets. |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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| Softness and serene is what I felt as I read this although there is touch of sadness also. What a beautiful person you must be to capture the wonder and beauty of nature so well. Hug's back at ya! June |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:52:54 AM AEST
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Wistful and mystical. It put me in a dreamy mood...
Beautiful.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Soulless on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 07:14:24 PM AEST
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This is as a song that sings of beauty on earth but of some sorrow clinging to the birds and other beings. you can take one word and turn it into something unforgetable which will make me feel any emotion you desire. With one simple word, blooms into your masterpieces.
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 02:53:37 PM AEST
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This is a great poem i hope to see alot more!
Sincerely
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:20:53 AM AEST
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This is deep and emotional Nessa, simply awesome. Took my breath away. Love the title as well, really drew me in to read the poem.
Love Dawny |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by Twisterchaser on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:26:07 PM AEST
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| A beauiful poem; by a beautiful person. |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:27:35 PM AEST
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| This poem has such a whimsicle feel, it makes you think, and thats what poetrys for |
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Re: when lonely rivers die
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 01:58:51 PM AEST
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Nessa this is absolutely beautiful, and add to it, a peice of perfection that if an angel were to write a poem they could certainly draw from this there insperation. And would be a bit envious i might add. Your a 21century
Elizabeth Barret Browning. Simply lovely and warm my friend. Your a true poet if ever there was . . .
((((Nessa))))
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