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A Wish For My Fading Star
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:27:24 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes,
and let out these cries.
Here tonight,
in this moonlight.
I pray for just one wish from afar,
a wish for my fading star.
I've lost my hope,
and now I'm on this tightrope.
Trying to blance myself out,
until I have no more of these doubts.
Doubts about losing this star of mine.
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sugar0986
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2004-04-26 13:27:24]
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Re: A Wish For My Fading Star
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:44:36 PM AEST
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| This was a really good poem I thought. |
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Re: A Wish For My Fading Star
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:45:41 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem! Excellent write! |
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Re: A Wish For My Fading Star
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by farmtowngirl on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:09:38 PM AEST
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Wow this poem is like...wow! when I read it, it was like all the emotion I've been having lately! AWESOME JOB! keep it up!
~*Liz*~ |
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